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#21 PaulfromTexas

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Posted 20 January 2010 - 02:01 PM

its different so thats cool

color could have been better, but i don't really have much to work with in terms of cameras.
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Posted 15 February 2010 - 04:03 PM

PaulfromTexas, on 20 January 2010 - 02:01 PM, said:

its different so thats cool

color could have been better, but i don't really have much to work with in terms of cameras.
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its still a pretty good picture tho. i like the colors and the gun is nice too

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Posted 23 February 2010 - 08:11 PM

PaulfromTexas, on 20 January 2010 - 02:01 PM, said:

its different so thats cool

color could have been better, but i don't really have much to work with in terms of cameras.
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nice pic good job
hit on the elbow tho hes out

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#24 lutzreblez17

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Posted 23 February 2010 - 08:19 PM

http://www.flickr.co...N02/4099408218/

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Posted 30 March 2010 - 06:48 PM

Amazing dog! I like the colors, It is a bit blurry, try maybe sharpening it a little. It may also look nicer if you zoomed out a little bit.

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#26 PaulfromTexas

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Posted 31 March 2010 - 12:37 AM

thats a really neat picture. makes me think of those posters with profound statements under them.
if criticism must be added....maybe if there was just a tad bit more in focus. and i really mean just a tad.

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Posted 05 April 2010 - 10:00 PM

PaulfromTexas, on 31 March 2010 - 12:37 AM, said:

My new Angel G7 that i just got in the mail yesterday

Like how the carpet adds a bit of depth to the shot. Weird, I know but it does IMO...

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Posted 05 April 2010 - 10:06 PM

A 'shopped photo from my photography class. One of my better shots. just the list of things 'shopped in the photo w/o anything left out unless I forgot I worked on it):

Hair: (removed some strays, tried to smooth/round her head more, didn't blend the smoothing/rounding because of the poor job I did of smoothing her head)

Background: (removed some spots [not noise though, just spots])

Shirt: (tried to fix it way back when but I obviously missed the spot and the blurry part of her middle torso on her left if you look closely)

Did a bit of work on the hand (didn't initially look right, fingers appeared weird), cam strap (ridges were also weird), and I'm pretty sure that's everything. maybe a small touch up of the camera too...

And I agree, it's the best photo I've ever seen too!

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Posted 08 April 2010 - 02:42 PM

how do u put a large image in?

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Posted 08 April 2010 - 03:08 PM

use [img ] pic link [/img ]

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Posted 08 April 2010 - 04:42 PM

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Posted 08 April 2010 - 04:52 PM

^ Cute dog but the only thing in focus is it's nose.

Taken in a moving car:
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#33 PaulfromTexas

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Posted 12 April 2010 - 12:39 AM

Decent picture. Considering its from a moving car and dont have the convenience to adjust your settings and what not.

Another of my G7. not really too much to take pictures of around here.
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Posted 07 May 2010 - 10:08 AM

let me know what you think of it.

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Posted 17 July 2010 - 07:56 PM

Trum_15, on 07 May 2010 - 10:08 AM, said:

let me know what you think of it.

Kind of a boring shot. He's just standing there. That blue car on the side is just too much. Maybe not enough lighting?

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#36 Naismith53

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Posted 25 July 2010 - 05:31 PM

pic from last year.
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Posted 23 September 2010 - 07:58 PM

xcozmonosx, on 15 December 2009 - 10:48 PM, said:

Naismith53, on 15 December 2009 - 02:05 AM, said:

very nice but the building above the back tire bothers me for some reson but very nice pic

in my opinion it needs to be cropped, the trees on the left side draw away from the bike and the ramp. nice picture

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Posted 23 September 2010 - 08:02 PM

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lutzreblez17, on 23 February 2010 - 08:19 PM, said:

http://www.flickr.co...N02/4099408218/

love huskeys awesome picture. im a ne3b at pcitures. but it looks really nice

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Naismith53, on 25 July 2010 - 05:31 PM, said:

Wow. That's a really cool photo. I think it would've looked better if you had waited for a bit more (enthusiastic) people to come along and look at the car. The post production looks cool, but almost "too" cool. It looks (at least to me) like someone just photoshopped a car onto a BW photo.

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Nice. The horizon is level, which many people forget or ignore. You're kind of off center of the walk, and generally it just seems like one of those photos that you've already seen. The focal point isn't really clear, either.

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