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#1 xpbphotography

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Posted 13 December 2008 - 11:10 AM

Rules:
-Don't post more than 1 photo at a time.
-Don't post photos unless you have given someone else C&C first.
-Keep criticism constructive. "That sux, lolz" doesn't help anyone. "That sux because _____" is perfectly acceptable.

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#2 HKA

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Posted 15 December 2008 - 12:05 AM

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 04:43 PM

just my opinion, but, i find the colors are a bit too oversaturated?? i think that shot would be great in black and white though.. why post such a nice shot in a constructive criticism thread??? :)

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Posted 22 March 2009 - 07:30 PM

i think the picture came out pretty good. i like the view.

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Posted 22 March 2009 - 08:00 PM

i think the picture came out pretty good. i like the view.

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Posted 22 March 2009 - 10:00 PM

idk. just found this toy, probably my nephews. has a pretty sick mo-hawk tho lmao :lol:

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Posted 29 June 2009 - 03:15 PM

No criticism here, I <3 Asians

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Posted 26 August 2009 - 10:14 AM

Its a little late but I'll still give it C&C.

1. It's under exposed.
2. I don't like the subject, it's pretty boring.
3. It would have been nice if the one knee wasn't oof.

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Posted 05 September 2009 - 12:47 AM

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Car is too centered (9 grid rule). Seeing more of the side would of been better. The sign for the store stands out to much
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Posted 26 October 2009 - 06:23 PM

If it's not too late, I'd like to revive this thread.

C&C to your hearts extent.

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Posted 04 November 2009 - 04:25 PM

this may be really big... i know i have to resize them (kitty sead this to me...)
so tell me what u guys think of it.
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Posted 05 November 2009 - 01:22 AM

this may be really big... i know i have to resize them (kitty sead this to me...)
so tell me what u guys think of it.
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Well, it is most definitely 'shopped, but I personally think that it looks pretty darn awesome. In my opinion, the area around the rear of the soft-ear could do without the blur that was applied, as it looks like someone colored it in. Also, I see the hopper more than the player due the barrier tops converging with the loader.


#16 Naismith53

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Posted 15 December 2009 - 10:48 PM

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very nice but the building above the back tire bothers me for some reson but very nice pic

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Posted 18 December 2009 - 11:54 PM

sorry posted for the wrong pic.

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Posted 21 December 2009 - 05:35 PM

just a pikcha

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Posted 21 December 2009 - 09:54 PM

would have been better without the cigs man lol but nice shot

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Posted 20 January 2010 - 02:01 PM

its different so thats cool


color could have been better, but i don't really have much to work with in terms of cameras.
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Posted 15 February 2010 - 04:03 PM

its different so thats cool


color could have been better, but i don't really have much to work with in terms of cameras.
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its still a pretty good picture tho. i like the colors and the gun is nice too

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Posted 23 February 2010 - 08:11 PM

its different so thats cool


color could have been better, but i don't really have much to work with in terms of cameras.
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nice pic good job
hit on the elbow tho hes out

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Posted 23 February 2010 - 08:19 PM

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Posted 30 March 2010 - 06:48 PM

Amazing dog! I like the colors, It is a bit blurry, try maybe sharpening it a little. It may also look nicer if you zoomed out a little bit.

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#26 PaulfromTexas

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Posted 31 March 2010 - 12:37 AM

thats a really neat picture. makes me think of those posters with profound statements under them.
if criticism must be added....maybe if there was just a tad bit more in focus. and i really mean just a tad.


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Posted 05 April 2010 - 10:00 PM

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Like how the carpet adds a bit of depth to the shot. Weird, I know but it does IMO...

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Posted 05 April 2010 - 10:06 PM

A 'shopped photo from my photography class. One of my better shots. just the list of things 'shopped in the photo w/o anything left out unless I forgot I worked on it):

Hair: (removed some strays, tried to smooth/round her head more, didn't blend the smoothing/rounding because of the poor job I did of smoothing her head)

Background: (removed some spots [not noise though, just spots])

Shirt: (tried to fix it way back when but I obviously missed the spot and the blurry part of her middle torso on her left if you look closely)

Did a bit of work on the hand (didn't initially look right, fingers appeared weird), cam strap (ridges were also weird), and I'm pretty sure that's everything. maybe a small touch up of the camera too...

And I agree, it's the best photo I've ever seen too! :D hahahaha jk.

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Posted 08 April 2010 - 02:42 PM

how do u put a large image in?

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Posted 08 April 2010 - 03:08 PM

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Posted 08 April 2010 - 04:42 PM

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Posted 08 April 2010 - 04:52 PM

^ Cute dog but the only thing in focus is it's nose.

Taken in a moving car:
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Posted 12 April 2010 - 12:39 AM

Decent picture. Considering its from a moving car and dont have the convenience to adjust your settings and what not.


Another of my G7. not really too much to take pictures of around here.
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Posted 07 May 2010 - 10:08 AM

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Posted 17 July 2010 - 07:56 PM

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Kind of a boring shot. He's just standing there. That blue car on the side is just too much. Maybe not enough lighting?

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Posted 25 July 2010 - 05:31 PM

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very nice but the building above the back tire bothers me for some reson but very nice pic



in my opinion it needs to be cropped, the trees on the left side draw away from the bike and the ramp. nice picture

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Posted 24 September 2010 - 07:03 PM

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Wow. That's a really cool photo. I think it would've looked better if you had waited for a bit more (enthusiastic) people to come along and look at the car. The post production looks cool, but almost "too" cool. It looks (at least to me) like someone just photoshopped a car onto a BW photo.

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Nice. The horizon is level, which many people forget or ignore. You're kind of off center of the walk, and generally it just seems like one of those photos that you've already seen. The focal point isn't really clear, either.

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Posted 09 April 2011 - 07:06 PM

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Cool dog, I like the wide angle. It looks a little soft. Might try to go down a stop to bring the sharpness up.

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Posted 25 May 2011 - 09:52 PM

Throw away shot nothing special. Framing is terrible and underexposed, If the ball was in the shot then maybe it would be better but other wise...
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Posted 25 May 2011 - 10:07 PM

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Looks meh.

no action.

Can't tell if she's trying to hit an football or a tenis ball. You never know.

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Posted 09 September 2011 - 11:41 PM

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just sum noob pics with a cheap camera
I dont need a $1000 gun to be good at paintball

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Posted 09 September 2011 - 11:43 PM

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wupdeedoo i gotta critisize sum1 first.. get a differant angle
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Posted 22 January 2013 - 04:32 AM

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 04:35 AM

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just sum noob pics with a cheap camera


the dirt bike pic would be better is it was an action shot.

the paintball pic try a different angle
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